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Training in a quiet stadium
Training shooting in a quiet stadium
Training defending in a quiet stadium
A devil is sleeping in a quiet stadium
A devil is roaring in a quiet stadium
A devil will open his eyes and make the quiet stadium noisy
Playing in a noisy stadium
Playing for the other teammates
Playing not for scores but for the fans
After the match, the last player left the stadium
After everything becomes quiet
The devil wakes up
Great poem you have here! There is good use of repetition, a poetry element, in here such as "Training", "A devil", "Playing", "After". Also, the flow which starts from training to the end of the match is nicely done. I really liked the last sentence "The devil wakes up". Still, it would be helpful if you brought in other poetry elements such as rhymes. Keep up the great work!
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